Getting back to the text

When trying to maintain a conversation in class that is both stimulating and relevant, it is necessary to promote student enthusiasm on the subject. This is difficult, because the student is not always enthused about the subject or reading. The reasons for this can be various. First, simply to accept the fact that a book is famous does not mean that the student will see the value in it. Without seeing the value, legitimate enthusiasm is not created. False enthusiasm is sometimes created by the student in order to appear engaged, but this at best leads to a starting point in a discussion. It does not allow for a deep discussion.

To handle this problem, I generally allow students to go off on tangents to some degree, even if it is just to build sufficient authentic enthusiasm for an interesting discussion to occur. But sometimes these tangents go too far afield. As discussion navigator, I sometimes cannot see how to tie the tangent back in to the intended topic. Sometimes I do see how to do this, and these are the best moments: I allow the student to go where they wish, and then I build from what they construct to show how it tells us something about the topic. But this is not always possible.

The starting point is key. What is the first question we will try to answer? The first problem we will try to solve? The first concept we contemplate? The first passage we read? The first 10 minutes of the class are often the most important. I am setting the course, which will need to be adjusted over the period of the class, but those first ten minutes can spell destruction if I get off on the wrong foot.

Over the last couple of days, I have employed the strategy of writing on the board one critical statement found near the end of the essay in question. If the essay we are reading is genuinely profound, the statement will be something that is counter-intuitive and the result of a long argument. If the student had done their reading, they have seen the argument and touched on the concepts, but they generally do not know all the nooks and crannies of the argument yet. The bulk of the essay probably looked like some nebulous cloud of ideas with a basic idea. But the depth was unseen. 

By starting the discussion by introducing the end of the text, the student is prompted to ask how this statement could be true, while utilizing whatever ideas they reaped from their first encounter with the text while reading on their own. It is a puzzle. If I picked the quote well, then with a little bit of discussion, the student will be curious and feel that figuring it out is important. Their curiosity is piqued. They want to know, and want to figure it out. Therein lies genuine education.  

For example, over the past two days, we have been discussing Plato’s Apology. Near the end of the text, there is a statement:

“Nothing can harm a good man, either in life or death.”

and, more famously:

“an unexamined life is no life for a human being to live.”

(Both quotes have been rendered in different ways. ie., The unexamined life is not worth living.)

We start with the first statement. The second sits on the board, inducing (I hope) temptation. But discussion starts with the first: do you believe it? Isn’t it a ridiculous statement looked at matter-of-factly? After prodding around a little bit, we see some students rendering ridiculously optimistic answers: bad things don’t happen to good people. Then we prod and prod, and someone eventually asks, “I don’t mean any offense, Mr. Swanson, but don’t we need to know what “good” is first?” Yes, and not only that, but “harm” and what a person is too. All three factors need to be puzzled. So hypotheses are given and examined, some rejected and others left. Then I ask, how is this related to the unexamined life quote?

At this point, we are in a position to delve into Plato’s metaphysics, questions of how the immortal soul affects one’s current ethical beliefs, the value of the mind, and whether or not the body is distinct from the mind. Conversation blooms, and at the end of the class I feel that every hope I had for that one hour fifteen minute period have been met.

Small Steps

For some reason, I am having a hard time writing anything of substance for this blog as of yet. I am going to start by making small posts to get back into the habit. The aim is not writing worthwhile things, but on posting something.

We are almost done with the second week of classes. I feel that my mind is still warming up after a month of inactivity, but today was an excellent mark of progress. I’m not the happiest camper right now for personal reasons. But I can say that a day like today is what makes my life worth living. The classes were stimulating, and I think everyone learned a lot about Socrates, ethics, and philosophy today through active learning.  I had fun, and felt fulfilled at the end of the day. I am optimistic that these classes are going to turn out pretty well.

Fun, Summer Syllabus Writing

Since the end of the semester, I’ve been having a lot of fun. And I haven’t been thinking very much. Or a better way of putting it is that I haven’t been thinking anything that I felt worth recording, or I haven’t been motivated to record what I have been thinking. Anyway, fun is the death of philosophy. Except that doing philosophy in itself is fun. So, philosophy cannot grow from fun– fun, however, often results from philosophy. Start with fun, and philosophy will not continue. Start with a lack of fun, and through philosophy, fun may be experienced.

Anyway, I’m slowly getting back to work. Today, I’m writing the syllabi for the summer. They are classes that I have taught before (Ethics and Introduction to Philosophy), so much will be the same. However, I always go back over the teaching objectives and classroom policies to see how it can be improved. I consider the experiments I made in my recent syllabi and consider how it changed the class, and if the changes were positive, I apply those changes to more than one syllabus. 

In the official syllabus on which instructors must model their own syllabus, their is an official plagiarism policy. I am required to include this in my syllabus, and I have done so in the past. However, as I think about plagiarism, particularly in the context of a class that focuses on argumentative writing and displaying the reasons for which the writer believes something to be true, I believe there is more to be said about plagiarism than simply the ‘rules’ that one ought not to break. Therefore, one thing that I will be working on today is a special commentary on plagiarism that I will attach to the official statement.

Second,  I am going to revise my learning objectives. Again, we are given some required learning objectives, but are allowed to include more. The learning objectives/outcomes that I created for last semester worked well, and perhaps I will not change them much. However, a recent peer review (well, the reviewer was a much more experienced professor) stated that while my objectives were overall excellent, they could be improved by using a few more active verbs. Honestly, writing is not my strong point, at least in relation to my peers, so I accept that this criticism is worth considering, even if I do not see it at this point and may ultimately disagree. Here are the learning objectives that I currently have listed on my syllabus:

1. Students will enhance their critical reading skills. Philosophy is inherently argumentative. This means, first, that the student will enhance their ability to distinguish sentences that express chief points, subordinate points, evidence, rationale, illustrations, and non-essential parts of an essay.

 

2. Students will enhance their critical writing skills. The writing assignments in this class are all argumentative and require that the student makes effective use of support (evidence and rationale) to prove subordinate points, and use subordinate points to support a clear, specific thesis (chief claim). Second, the student will learn how to organize these elements chiefly in order to make the argument appealing and easy to understand for the audience.

 

3. Students will enhance their critical discussion skills. This involves constructing different types of questions about the text, and then facilitating a conversation by critically responding to responses. Students will all be required to lead discussions throughout the semester.

 

4. Ultimately, students will enhance their critical thinking skills. The distinction here is somewhat arbitrary, because the previous objectives all involve critical thinking in specific forms. However, there are areas of critical thinking that are not covered in the previous categories. For the purposes of this class, critical thinking is involved in (1) finding error and (2) deducing which extra, unjustified beliefs were involved in producing that error. This attempt can be found in reading, writing, and discussion.

 Any thoughts? 

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New Link/About this Blog

To the right, under the heading “Pages,” I have added a link titled “About this Blog.” It is taken from a post written a few months ago that describes the function of this blog. There are a few new readers so I thought it would be important to put this in an easily recognized place.  This blog would probably seem strange without knowing its function.

Habits in Writing the Last Essays of a Semester

As a teacher, something that I noticed is that at the beginning of the semester, I was highly engaged, pro-active, and went beyond what I needed in terms of reading and preparation. As the semester moved on, and papers-to-grade became my life’s primary burden activity, I did not have the mental freedom to devote the time I did before on unrelated research, and lecture preparation became more hurried. 

As I am grading the final essays, I notice that the essays are more mature than they were at the beginning of the semester. The ideas are richer in places. However, they also seem hurried. The students who had been doing well have more grammar mistakes. The students who had highly organized and focused essays for the second paper are looser now. I imagine it is probably a similar mental burden that I faced. As the semester moves on, and as some students become confident, some do not try as hard.

There is also the added challenge that, whereas my other essay assignments are staggered so that they miss the weeks that are usually reserved for mid-term exams, the final essay was probably due on the same day as final exams. I tried to avoid this, but I gave them extensions to give them more time…I think in general, I basically gave them more rope to hang themselves. 

Solutions? Next semester, I will be extra viligant in keeping the due date earlier than the last week. Also, I did not give as much guidance for the last paper as I did for the first two, thinking that I was simply going to be repetitive. Well, that guidance may have provided important reminders to some. 

I do not want to project, and perhaps this is speaking to my own habits more than my students. And certainly this does not apply to all students.

Plans for Next Semester

Something that I included over the past two semesters that I excluded this semester was a regimented class discussion component. By ‘regimented,’ I mean that I made it an explicit point in the design of the semester and syllabus to include discussion sessions once every one or two weeks. The participation and assignments from discussion days were seperate from participation and assignments from non-discussion days. At the end of the Fall semester, I was feeling like the system I had in place was too rigid, so I replaced it with a non-regimented, but large participation component of the grade that I could use how I wished, when I wished. The intent was to give me the freedom to tailor the conduct of the class from day to day, based on the discussion and needs of the students. However, this created the affect that I would often put off small discussions while I was wrapping up a lecture on something else. However, when I start the day by speaking about one thing, almost in all cases the lecture morphed into a large discussion, and the large discussion dominated the hour. This had the result of nearly eliminating the small group discussion componenet of the class.

Despite the relative lack of freedom that the former method brought about, I think that the overall goods were greater than the alternative. Starting this summer and continuing, probably forevermore, I will re-regimentalize the small group discussion component of the class.  I should note that by ‘regimental,’ I do not imply a military level of organization. There is still quite a bit of freedom: in fact, the regimenting protects the time of the small group discussion so, in the end, the students acquire more freedom.

 

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